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The Bref Double

The bref double is a French form. It is similar to the sonnet, but it need not be written in iambic pentameter (it can be in tetrameter, hexameter, or any other meter you prefer). The rhyme scheme is also different from a sonnet. The bref double contains three quatrains (four-line stanzas) followed by a final couplet.

a/x/b/c
x/a/x/c
a/x/a/b
a/b

The x standing for a line that doesn’t rhyme with any of the other lines.

An example:


Road Closed...

With crystal rain, the sky is filled
with diamond flakes that swirl and dance
to tunes that they alone may know,
unheeded by the ears of man.

The northern winds play havoc with
mere mortal plans, as drifts now build
their buttresses of pristine white
as if to mark some hidden plan.

This land is decorated, chilled,
and sealed for all to gaze with joy;
see all the children laugh, so thrilled
to witness Mother Nature’s show!

Though my intent lies thwarted, killed,
my smile grows broad at so much snow!

Copyright soulsease 2003


Sources: http://www.geocities.com/soulsease1/forms/brefdouble.html and http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/farp/thewriting/27brianforms/27brianforms.html#brefdouble
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`darkcrescendo:icondarkcrescendo: Sep 7, 2004, 10:07:29 PM
An interesting structure. I shall have to try this one sometime.

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~ezo:iconezo: Sep 9, 2004, 1:53:27 PM
Wow! I really like this one. The rhyme scheme is so subtle.

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~Atrocity-of-life:iconAtrocity-of-life: Sep 9, 2004, 8:55:31 PM
Very nice example. Maybe I'll try this in french if I ever feel adventurous.

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!RebeccaA:iconRebeccaA: Sep 18, 2004, 12:57:02 AM
So typically French
~Jaxom:iconJaxom: Sep 20, 2004, 5:33:08 PM
groovy, you mind if i do one of these and copy your explination of what it is?

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~poetic-forms:iconpoetic-forms: Sep 20, 2004, 7:30:31 PM
No, not at all, just give poetic-forms the credit for the write-up.

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~ACauseRemains:iconACauseRemains: Dec 8, 2004, 5:33:00 PM
I haven't yet thanked anyone for giving the descriptions of the forms....
so...

Thank you.

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*IfrozenspiritI:iconIfrozenspiritI: Jan 28, 2005, 9:19:07 PM
Cool, I'm excited to give this a try... :)

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~jeffhoppdotnet:iconjeffhoppdotnet: Sep 26, 2005, 12:05:32 AM
this is interesting. I used to, and still do, get alot of ideas for song lyrics....the concepts I think are pretty good, but when I write them using poetic verse, there always seems something not correct. The meter is wrong or I am breaking some rule that I am not aware of. I would like to learn more about different types of structures....if you have any examples of other forms I would like to see them.

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